Hey, thanks for contributing! A couple things: I know I said to make her short, but she's still 18. The youngest she should look is high-school-aged. It's pretty important that she has some length to her, because when she's up in the air as a monster, she'll have a constant, clear line-of-action that runs through her body, and that'll be really difficult to do if she has Stewie proportions. Also I know I said that I liked the bigger pupils, but the pupils you drew are just too big. Makes her look too cartoony. Lastly, I imagine you just drew her about to stomp on a spider just for fun, but just in case you didn't know, Maggie is definitely not the kind of person who would do that. She's very sweet and gentle, if distant and troubled.Sorry for all them words, but I just wanted to make myself clear on what I want. Keep it up!
Okie doke, I'll get to work.